Which of these loved consumer brands has better ads? What makes a winning formula?
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Connecty scored each ad on 12 creative dimensions and a 35-point checklist. Scores on public ads, not performance data.
9 of 9 hooks scored strong. Formats: a pain-point warning ("If you bike outside, don't skip this"), POV, day in the life, testimonial.
All 9 ads use a creator or talking head. Product understanding scored very clear in 7 of 9.
A cut about every 2 seconds. All 5 Raycon ads scored efficient or acceptable pacing. Shokz cuts every 3.4 seconds, and 3 of 4 Shokz ads scored slow or poor pacing.
In all 4 Shokz ads, the deciding moment is a benefit or a demo, like swimming with the headphones on. In 4 of 5 Raycon ads, it is the offer or CTA in the final seconds.
My headphones are exactly where I placed them at the start of my run.
Beat drop challenge, day 16: relearning how to swim.
I can still hear everything around me.
The open-ear design keeps me safe.
If you bike outside, don't skip this.
I don't want to admit when I'm wrong, but I am obsessed with these.
A strong hook cannot make up for a missing ask. A persuasive ad cannot make up for a page that changes the promise.
| ShokzCategory creation | RayconDemand harvesting | |
|---|---|---|
| Conversion job | Make open-ear matter while you move. | Make the deal win against big brands. |
| Story path | Day in the life, testimonial, POV. Mostly TOFU and MOFU. | Short-form sales pitch, us vs them, POV. 4 of 5 ads are BOFU. |
| Where ROAS leaks | None of the 4 ads shows an offer. 3 of 4 never ask for the sale. Proof rests on the creator alone. The open-ear lesson can help a cheaper rival. | In 4 of 5 ads the offer and CTA arrive in the last seconds. 3 of 5 say too much. Busy visuals in 2. |
| After the click | One ad sends to a generic collection page. Two creator ads show no landing page. | Each ad has a product page, but a "Shop all deals" CTA lands on a single-product page. |
| Opportunity identified | Name the product, add reviews or other customers' voices, show an offer, and ask for the sale. | Show the offer early, with one customer quote. Keep the ad's exact promise on the page. |
| Opportunities | 58across 4 ads | 64across 5 ads |
| Full analysis | Shokz preview → | Raycon preview → |
Shokz must make the category matter. Raycon must make the transaction credible.
Method: Connecty analyzed 4 Shokz and 5 Raycon public Meta video ads and their landing pages. Retention uses industry benchmarks, not the brands' own data. This describes creative structure and likely friction, not campaign performance. Findings are patterns in this sample, stated with counts, not verdicts on either brand.